what are the mistakes of my grammar?

This homework is really torturing me. I want to know what are the mistakes I did with this paragraph. Please help me: Both children set aside their food for a while and ran toward their father. “Papa!” both of them said. Now the family is complete in the dining table and they started eating together. That lunch is the start of the best day of their lives. The Next day the boy woke up and he ran fast to get outside his room. He saw his parents at the dining table drinking their coffee. “Mama, Papa can I play outside?” he asked. “You should eat your breakfast first, my dear,” the mother said. “You have to brush your teeth and take about too...,” his father said. The boy saw a bun of bread, He prayed for a minute Then he ate eat gently to show his parents that he had manners. After eating he brushed his teeth, Cleaned up and changed his clothes. Arturo is ready to play games with his friends. He headed to the grass fields near their village where he always plays with his playmates. He saw five boys waiting for him. “Arturo Let’s go play soccer!” the dark skinny boy said. They run as wild animals freed from the cage and started playing the game they love to play. Every person at the small barrio has a simple but happy life every night each members of the families are all complete at home. Until some of the fathers decided to work abroad for a better life. They are in the middle of kicking the poor soccer ball when they paused on what they see. A little girl came in and they where shocked on what they see. The girl is Perfecta; she is the Boyish little girl who always plays soccer with them. They where shocked seeing her on a pink dress because she never dressed that way before.

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1. do your own homework.
2. Improper use of capital letters and punctuation.
3. What are the mistakes with my grammar?
4. Both children sat aside their food for a while and ran toward their father. “Papa!” both of them said. Now the family "was" complete in the dining table and they started eating together. That lunch was the start of the best day of their lives. The next day the boy woke up and (he) ran fast to get outside"of" his room. He saw his parents sitting at the dining table drinking coffee. “Mama, Papa can I play outside?” he asked. “You should eat your breakfast first, my dear,” the mother said. “You have to brush your teeth and take about two.,” his father said. The boy saw a bun (loaf?) of bread, He prayed for a minute Then he ate gently showing his parents that he had manners. After eating he brushed his teeth, cleaned up and changed his clothes. Arturo "was" ready to play games with his friends. He headed to the grass fields near their village where he always played with his playmates. He saw five boys waiting for him. “Arturo! Let’s go play soccer!” the dark skinny boy said. They ran as wild animals freed from the cage and started playing the game they loved to play. Every person at the small barrio had a simple but happy life. Every night each family member was complete at home until some of the fathers decided to work abroad for a better life. They were in the middle of kicking the poor soccer ball when they paused at what they saw. A little girl came in and they where shocked at what they saw . The girl is Perfecta; the boyish little girl who always plays soccer with them. They where shocked to see a pink dress on her because she never dressed that way before.
5. towards get out of his room ate food always played let us go to play they loved to play they ran all members they saw they saw